♥I need you♥
♥I want you♥
♥I can't live without you♥
♥And I ♥ you more than life♥
?But why do I?
?Always do the things?
?That hurt me?
?And hurt you?
!All I know is that!
!I ♥ you!
!If you ever said adieu!
!Then I know that I would fail to exist!
:♥And♥: :♥Living♥: :♥Limbo♥:
$While$ $In$
:♥ I ♥: :♥Sit♥: :♥And♥:
$Would$ $Around$
:♥Reminice♥: :♥The♥: :♥Of♥:
$About$ $Times$
^*Old*^
^*When*^
^*We*^
^*Once*^
^*Loved.*^
^~But~^
^~I~^
^~Know~^
^~That~^
^~I'll~^
{Never}
{Try}
{To}
{Do}
{Anything}
~^To^~
~^Ever^~
~^Lose^~
~^You^~
*~So~*
*~I'm~*
*~Sorry~*
*~About~*
*~The~*
*~Stupid~*
*~Things~*
*~I~*
"Do"
"And"
"Now"
"I'll"
"Stop"
"For"
"Fear"
:♥Of♥:
:♥Losing♥:
:♥You!♥:
So idk where this came from it just came to me
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Yeah the punctuation was really cliche but it was a good poem!
The part with the $ signs was hard to understand. And I didn't like the fact that you used the word you a ton of times but...if you like it then thats all that matters! -
I LOVE IT IT IS AMZING WOOOOOO ♥ ALESHA
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woo!! I love it!!! ♥ JOJO
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The section in the middle with the $ was alittle too hard to read, almost said forget reading it, but the ending really pulled me in.
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Well... I most definitley give you props for originality with this one... I liked the format for sure... the words were a bit... I dunno ... overused... but I actually did enjoy this.
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