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Cold Winter Winds

Where is my love?
it has disappeared,
blown away on cold winter winds,
never to be seen again.

Where is my hope?
I do no know,
it is lost,
never to be seen again.

Where is my reason to live?
I wish i knew,
will I ever see it again?

The answer to these questions,
I do not know,
my heart is empty,
I just hope is does not show.

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  • Scrunter
    March 26, 2008

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    A true write here which is close to my heart. It does get better!
    Good luck and thank you for entering


  • Pandorea
    March 19, 2008

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    ooo...sad. the last two lines really hit me..the deapir the narrator is feeling. just a thing, you didn't capitalise an 'i' in the 3rd stanza.


  • irishmidnight
    March 11, 2008

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    That quote has so many different thoughts behind it. But you brought out it's major meanings. I like this one alot. And I think you did this picture some damn good justice!! **hugs** Great write hun!!