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~My Masterpiece~

Reasoning...

My mind surged black images
of my next slaughter.
Thoughts burned in my head as
the faint echo of silent screams intensified.

Was it just me?
Was it guilt beginning to
plague my hardened soul?

Each death....

immortalized my wave of apathy.

But this one...

Heh heh!

This one sent my eyes burning.
A lone tear to caress my cheek.
My smile...artificial,
unlike the kills of the past.
There it lingered;
it haunted me.
Just a fragment of sorrow.

This one...she was beautiful
she was...life.

As if she could be the suns light
that brings out a rainbow.

Her cold lifeless body lay at my feet.
A red rose in one hand
and in the other....

is what should have
protected her from me.
I should be the one....

the one lying cold and dead
on the pavement.
Blood escaping my body
while ice seethed in my veins
and my soul condemned to hell.

Instead, her gun that she
fixated on was her own betrayal.

As the moon reflected its
pale light upon her lifeless corpse,
the dark of the night
has called to me once more.
Cast its spell,
curses my name...

This frantic need to
once again become this monster.
This being from which
love had created
but insanity had destroyed.
It poisons my mind
and yet warms my soul with
the deepest and brightest flame.

It's a shame, there will
be none left to enjoy it.

To marvel at my accomplishments....

my masterpiece.


Author notes

Background Courtesy of LadyDementia

This is a continuation from my story ~Memoires of Murder~


Part 1
Empty Carcass
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3848603



Part 2
~Birth of a Killer~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3924763



Part 3

~The Suffering~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3944421

Part4

~A Voice Without Reasoning~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4004399


Part 5

~My Masterpiece~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4010999


Part 6
~Trick or Treat~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4702575

Part 7
~My Madness~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4765093


Part 8
~Judgement Day~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5808785

Part 9
~Benediction~
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5830803

For the record, I have never killed nor intend to kill anyone this is pure FICTION

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  • Tattboyspet
    June 25, 2008

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    sheesh! you seriously DO think like a maniacal psychopath don't you?!
    amazing imagery here and your ending was well worth the wait!
    every word read intrigued me to read more and I found myself reading faster as I started getting into it (which was by about the 3rd word lol!)
    congrats on the HM


    • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
      June 25, 2008

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      Trust me you would be surprised...

      I have yet to complete this story, I just needed to take a break from it...


  • Aeonna
    April 7, 2008

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    FABULOUS...

    OH.. VERY CREEPY. I ALSO LUV THE WAY YOU USE THE WORK BANK.. THANKS FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST...

    SISTER GRIMM


  • SpiceRack
    March 19, 2008
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    Creeeepy. And still fantastically demented. :]


  • Kari gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    This was very very dark indeed and chilling...you did great on using the word bank. Good luck in the contest


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 12, 2008

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    Wowzers! This is beautifully dark. It really grips you and draws you into the story line. The imagery in this piece is outstanding, it created great visuals as I read. I have read some of the others in this set but I really should read them in order It is now on my 'to do' list. Simply breathtaking. Best of luck in the contest


    • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
      March 13, 2008
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      I hope that when you read them in order you enjoy them...but then again part four is currently entered in your darkwrite contest so....lol like I said ENJOY!!!!!!


  • Wrendered
    March 11, 2008

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    Holy Crap

    I fall into a masterpiece of wonder and accomplishment with a maniacal twist into it everytime i read a continuation of this story.... I love it. It draws your readers in and turns their minds inside out. The beauty of a murder....? Knowing how to make a love out of a twisted fantasy.


    I love this. Thank you for sharing. (i hope all that made sense)


    :Wren:


    • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
      March 12, 2008
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      thank you very much....i am really having a blast writing this story. It is a different twist for me too.

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