Mixed emotions thrown in the air
Floating away like I just don't care
Heartbeats pass with a tidal scream
Setting reality as more than what it seems
Crashing waves like an emotional race
Taking my heart, Tapping at his pace
Springing forward only to fall back
Pulsating furiously at the emotional lack
Head beating to a twisted heart attack
Fragile tears far to easy for him to crack
Jolts of pain to replace the love I've shown
Cold, black, death, depressed- All hes known
Author notes
Option # 2. Write a piece about something that you dislike or troubles you might have.
explanation: I was with a guy for close to 3 years. We spent ttwo of them in different states I came back to be with him and he begged me to come and now hes pretty mush like fuck you and didnt talk to me for 4 days then yesterday he was like "oh I love you so much" and this is what came from that.. I am troubled by it
A contest entry
- Expressing Your Feelings by Judo.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 10 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful poem. I think you did very well with this. I am deeply sorry with your issue. I hope you get it fixed. The stanza's could've been seperated a tiny bit, but that's okay. You don't have to worry about that. I wish you great luck in the contest and hope you fix things straight with your problem.
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