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Calling to Me

She calls to me
In a halo of white
Beckoning me to be free
To be rid of this fright

Should I go with her?
Take her up on her offer
I said no because I wasn't sure
By the morning I forgot her

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    Ahhh...seems you missed your chance poet. This is indeed clever and a very original take on the prompt picture. Thank you very much for this entry in my contest. I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Light ♥

    Renee