to find the daisies
wilting with latin symbols
is narcissism
when the clouds raining carbon
left you with no sense of smell
~
Author notes
5-7-5-7-7 syllable count
A contest entry
- TANKA TIME by Swan song.
650 points, ended March 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
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Wow. Top notch man. A lot of emotion and imagery.
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Wow! very good excellent message
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Great creativity.
Loved it.
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Very Nice
Loved this ultra cool ultra shot Tanka poem lil bro. its incredible how much detailing and imaging you can plac einto a poem with so fe wof words. any ways all round a very well penned great poem and keep up the good work n good luck =)
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refreshing
well written, well done, i like it
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