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Music is

Music is my soul my curse
it's binding spell through each verse
has kept me within it's constant hold
and refuses to let me go

Music is my strength my blood
it's my weakness and my Noah's flood

the pulse inside my every thought

were every uttered move is wrought

 

Music has tattoed my soul

permenently marking  my whole

with out it I can't hope to survive

with out it I'm everything but alive

 

Darkly spinning out of control

music has tattoed my soul

And nothing could ever wipe away

such a mark it's here to stay

 

Music is my strentgh my curse

my soul existed inside each verse

and even when I am long dead

the music will be here instead

Author notes

I wrote off picture 1 'Bittersweet symphony'

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  • Silent Saint
    October 12, 2008

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    raw emotion i love it

    music has its symphony as well as life. i enjoyed this poem very much. let music lead u to more astounding feats.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    OOPs forgot clappies

    Here they are


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    Very nice work

    I to think that music is truly so deeply felt and it brings verse so often to touch the soul


  • stylization
    March 11, 2008

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    thanks for entering!
    in the second to last verse, it should be "wipe" instead of "wpie"
    other than that good poem and good luck!


  • maggii8292
    March 11, 2008
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    wow

    that was really good thats how i feel too

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