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The Promise

God smiles his promise,
each storm
ends with a rainbow.

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masterblaster.

A contest entry

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  • sunflowerpoet
    March 17

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    Oh, that is such an awesome take on the prompt. I love your idea, and the message of the poem. Thank you for entering and maintaining the word count.
    Sunflower.
  • Puppydog gold member
    March 11
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    When one stops and looks at a rainbow they realize just how beautiful his smile is.'s


  • APoeticDreamer
    March 11

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    I love this. Its so true. I like the first line. "God Smiles his promise" Its great. I really enjoyed this. What else can I say about a three lined poem. LOL