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Wings In Flight

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Evening shadows,
distant light.
Soft winds blow,
wings in flight.

Beauty frolics,
on tiny blades.
In forrest deep,
and everglades.

Distant light...
wings in flight.

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  • poetryality silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    This is superb! It flits across the page like a faerie flirting with fireflies. What a freeing work of poetry. I am left enchanted with the magic here. ~Sigh

    Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the Comp.


    Much Love & Light ♥

    Renee


  • tomisb
    March 12, 2008

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    So full of magic and so vulnerable to disbelief. Wonderful vision of promise and hope.
    Love, Tom B.