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What hurts is

What hurts is the way you look at me.
You imply I'm fat after loosing 16 pounds,
Then tell me how pretty the other girls are that you see.

What hurts is when I come to visit when you are down.
I find other girls are beckoned by you to come,

but you turn me away and don't want me around.

 

What hurts is I put you as a priority in my life.

and I am only an option for you.

afterall shouldn't your priority be your wife?

 

What hurts is the little thing you do everyday,

that put a wedge between me and you,

that make me feel like running away.

 

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  • Frozen Fears
    March 15, 2008

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    did he hurt you??kat..what did he do?? ur tiny you always have been i hate to see you hurt you have been hurt so many times i wish to see you happy for once..


  • HeLovesMeNot
    March 11, 2008

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    I liked it especially:
    What hurts is the way you look at me.

    Only sixteen, but I felt this line was what really drew me into the poem.