The night is lite with 1 small candle.
I stand there with tears.
My eyes are saddend and grey.
Black eyeliner smears across my face.
My dark brown hair in front of my face.
What have I done.
Why can't I make things right for once.
Your voice is just screaming in my head.
I know I need to get my life straight.
I fall to my knees.
I cover my face.
I didn't think I would walk this far.
Quistioning all,
I never knew,
I strive to break free.
My life is like one bad dream,
A horror movie you've never seen.
I wouldn't care if I woke up tomarrow,
or the next day or the day after that,
Because all I am is in pain,
I cry every night, trying to figure out why.
Our song I play it over and over
about 50 times.
I'm falling.
I still think it's to late for me to turn around.
But I know I'll always love you, because you got
A speacial place in my heart.
I know you don't deserve to be put through this.
But do I?
This isn't right.
I need to figure this out.
Sitting on my floor hiding my face.
Down on my knees
Tears stream faster.
Our song plays.
Into the night I dream about you.
The angels sang me to sleep.
Taking me away into the night.
I was spinning around with the
moon in my eyes. Wishing you
here.
Take my hand, and look into my eyes,
Tell me what you see. Whisper that you
love me, or say goodbye.
A contest entry
- PIF Contest by XxshadowedcherryxX.
500 points, ended March 28, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes.......But it has to have emotion by Nikki Rowles.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 70 entries
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Is it good or not? What would you change or add?
Comments
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Very good....
I wouldn't add anything....I love the last line 'Tell me what you see. Whisper that you love me, or say goodbye" i know what that's like I've written things like it, but it was the option "now or never"

