so I need you to say
what you think of this poem,
please do it today.
Some trophies at stake
points on the line too;
when you have read this
you know what to do.
Just leave a few words
let me know what you think,
maybe this poem might
give me reason to drink.
Champagne to you all
I will raise a tall glass,
thanking you very much
here's to you all, en masse.

Hah, fooled you, I did
no bubbly, at most;
will just drink to your health
with this beer, to the host.

a nice, light hearted read! I liked the fun spin you put on it at the end. thanks for sharing!





and that extends to the reader and i felt quite light hearted after reading













I can't say I've read many of your humorous poems, but you definitely have a niche for it. Nice job! I liked the rhyming, humor, and choice of words which all added to your piece nicely. Thanks for the entry














I thought this poem was very well written,with wonderful rhythm and flow.
















































757 old applause
