if a pictureis worth a thousand words
i wonder what this says of me
alone in the dark not a soul in sight
the only light comes from the moon and stars above
hair dyed dark
clothes as black as the night her self
if my son could see these pictures
what would he say
what would he think of me
if he only knew the words
that were scribbled in mommys books
if could see in to the past
and what mommy was really like
would i scare him
he's only a baby now
but what if one day
he stumble across
these pictures of me
what would i say to him....
other than i'm sorry...
Author notes
2. Windows to her Soul. By AverRal on deviantART.
A contest entry
- Two Options; Dark Picture Prompt by stylization.
450 points, ended March 17, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oh I love this.
Please fix the typo in the first line; otherwise it was good. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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A full mind...
...you tell the truth. Hiding ourselves for our actions in the past is like pissing on the grave of a loved one, except the loved one is ourselves.
A beautiful ponder btw
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Interesting little write you have here. I enjoyed reading this keep up the good job.
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