Little things
Mean nothing to others
Yet to us they mean the world
Heart sings
To see you happy
Emotions run deeper always
Glad
Life going well
And together we still stay
Author notes
Modulus: New Poetic Form
by David R. Hall aka Poetic Theorem
All Rights Reserved
Please use my new poetic form, Modulus
However, please credit me in your Author's notes
9 lines total
Sylables: (3,6,9,2,5,8,1,4,7)
44 Sylables total
To learn more about the "Modulus" Poetic form
Please read my column on at the following:
http://allpoetry.com/column/2341039
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good job Jen, good use of this form and very nice flow and wording. You've created wonderful images. Thanks for sharing and keep the pen flowing
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Precious
Jen,
Your inspiration and talents are making my Modulus form so lovely. This write is so heart warming and true as well. The flow is great in addition to the vocabulary. The flow is splendid
~Little things do mean the world~
You taking the time to work with my form means more to me than you'll ever know.
I really appreciate you and thank you soooo much!
Much love,
Many blessings
~David
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So calmly said this just floats into my heart and creates smiles all round
Another stunning write hun
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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This one read better than the last one, but the first one flowed excellently
lol! I'm just pointing out which one I enjoyed the most - my expertise on poetry sucks!
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