I'm suffocating.
I can't breathe for this pain.
You've left my side.
And I feel there's nothing left to gain.
I'm so hurt and ashamed...
Was I not good enough?
I thought I was amazing
With the girlfriend stuff.
I'm so lost and alone.
And broken for sure.
What will I do now?
Your love was my cure.
I don't feel whole.
I feel less than a person.
All I can fear,
Is that my heartache will worsen.
You broke it off,
In the worst way.
I know I should be angry...
But I'm just wishing you'd stay.
By my side, with me
To hold me tight.
To wipe away the tears
When I cry at night.
But instead, here I am.
Alone, all alone.
I should have realized things were too good.
God, I should have known.
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oh, i also liked the sad humor in "i thought i was amazing/with the girlfriend stuff." very effective
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the last line hits and breaks hard. it is bitter and edged and true.
"God, i should have known."
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oh sweetie, i am so sorry!!!!!!!!
listen to me, things will get better. i dont no when but you have to give it time, the shit will go away and you will feel less alone, and you'll find your smile, and will honestly be able to say that you've done it. you've gotten thru the stuff that you thought was the hardest to get thru.
but you have to wait for that time ot come, in the mean time all you can do is try to put up with it.
take care of yourself, and if u need to tlka you no i am here
love HB
xoxoxoxoxoxox
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wow very powerful!!! Awesome job
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Wow
Amazing! Good Job!!! -
Kari... this isn't because of you, at all. BE angry. Blame me.
I deserve it.
And I'm so, so sorry for what I've done to you. -
wow strong poem i love it....
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