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Addictive Love

Do you really want to close that door
and let it be, what was before?
Ignorance and bliss to sway again
in the surface of this wooden door.

Do you really want to let it go
what we had in those nights?
Passion deeper than Earth itself,
passion hotter than Sun itself.

I know of how our hearts bled,
drowned in pain, clubbed to death,
but tell me now, honestly,
isn't that love, real, addictive love?

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  • Asdzaa Nadleehe
    March 25, 2008

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    Oh my goodness...such a powerful write...the imagery is simply wonderful...
    I adore powerful poetry...
    Many blessings
    ~A~


  • Dalaney gold member
    March 15, 2008

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    what a statement!:
    I know of how our hearts bled,
    drowned in pain, clubbed to death,
    but tell me now, honestly,
    isn't that love, real, addictive love?

    it gave me shivers.

    Love, Lane


  • Blue Rew silver member
    March 12, 2008

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    This throws into sharp relief the double-edged
    sword of raging passion. I really like the
    questioning voice here and the simile used in
    sun and earth....where one does revolve
    around the other in constant pull and cycles.
    Blue