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Keep Out

KEEP OUT

 Sitting on my horse
taking in all the pride,
My land and my creatures
by my side.
Hunters
They try to sneak in,
Killing these creatures
again and again.
But I fight ~ I take control,
For these animals
they have stole.
I will not let them tare
this land apart,
These animals and this land
will forever be in my heart.
Nothing or no one
will make it's way through,
My land, my view,
These animals
are not for you!!!

KEEP OUT PRIVATE OWNED,
The love for these animals
I have shown!

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  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    excellent piece, I love the final lines. A thoroughly enjoyable read, thanks for entering my contest.
    Rory

  • genevieve28
    March 22, 2008
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    very nice

    write somemore!