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Silently She Waits

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my body, bathed by desert sun
retains the warmth of our last
night together, long and lonely


hours I have waited for you to
ride out of the sunset and take
me eternally to your heart

 


passion's heat will never fade

nor will the love that fills me die
with the day's last rays of light

 

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sorry, sweetheart...not my best but I wanted to write for your contest.

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  • DarkLotus4Life.
    March 12, 2008
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    I really liked this piece, it's very pretty.

  • Amarige
    March 11, 2008
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    Wonderful entry..beautifully worded..best of luck
    Ruby


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    March 11, 2008
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    sultry,,sensual wonderful good luck xx


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Oh mummy this is a beautiful write the sensual and loving touch that can felt in your words it cries so much. its beautiful I love it. I love you more


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Never apologize for what your heart transcribes into written word. This is a lovely and sensitive labor that certainly warrants praised recognition dear.


    Sincerely,
    mj.

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