While your eyes reflect hidden galaxies
and arms gently curve like endless rivers,
it was the effortless beauty I found
in the arch of your foot;
That I knew love.
Author notes
prompt:
"I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz,
or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off." -- Pablo Neruda
30 words
A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by whispernthedark.
300 points, ended March 11, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful take on the prompt, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
♥
whisper
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interesting write. I like it. Keep up the good job. It was well worth the read. Very beautiful.
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Wow,
Such a lovely piece of poetry!
Thanks for sharing here, you rock.
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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