In your arms
Is where I belong
The road to freedom
It is long
But I will walk it
Because I know
With you is where I fit
I will be with you where ever you go
You ignite a fire
That's been dead for so long
When we talk of our desire
To be with eachother, thats where we belong
I know in the end
When all is said and done
Our love I will defend
Because I know you are the one
Your the one for me
In every single way
I can't wait to see
The day that you and I are free
Free to love eachother
Without distance or boundaries
Free to be with one another
And forget about my mother
The only thing that frightens me
Is that when you get angry
You say those things you say
I dont want your temper to be the reason
That I walk away
I can forgive
What has happened in the past
As long as I know
That your love for me will outlast
The test of time.
It is up to you now my dear
Whether you are willing to hold on
Until the day you can have me near
I know in the end
When all is said and done
Our love I will defend
Because I know you are the one
Author notes
Personal write.
A contest entry
- Love me or burn me by Shadowfang.
300 points, ended March 20, 2008, 14 entries
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this is very heartbreaking of youn loves struggling to be together, it happens so many times, but I think someday you will understand why your mother made these choices, It is so hard growing up intodays times, and even harder being the parent a beautiful write all the same you are wonderful at exspressing your self your feelings I think if you work on your stanzas punctuation to help draw the reader in you will find many wonderful comments amongst your pages
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Oh so touching, very loving and just so beautiful here, oh the hopes and dreams....one of your best for sure
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thank you hunnie...
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wow this is good i like the part where it said "I know in the end
When all is said and done
Our love I will defend
Because I know you are the one"
i thought that this was the best and i think you did a really good job.
keep writing
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thank you so much!
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