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True Feelings

AT first i was afraid,
To show you that i care.
I felt so ashamed,
even though you were always there.
I loved you when you didn't love me,
And i will forever.
I don't know how long it took you to see,
But i don't care.
I have you now and thats all that matters.
No pain or shame.
I regret not telling you earlier,
But if i did i would cause my beloved friend pain.
But now she doesn't care for me,
The way i cared for her.
She wants you back you see?
And my mind is a blur.
I just love you too much to lose you now,
Or even to imagine.
I don't know how,
To see fit.
To tell you what I want you to hear,
These feelings I have.
My love so dear,
Never wanting to make you mad.
But in some special way,
I know you know.
I know that you may.
even if its hard for me to show,
You know these feelings,
Feelings so true.
Feelings that say
I love you.

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  • Yumi
    March 27, 2008

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    It swept my mind. I don't know how to put it. Beautiful? Amazing? No, it's much more than that. It's...?...inspiring! Good luck

    Erica ^.^


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    NIce,

    Always a blessing when love is found, even better when that love is received in purity. Thanks for sharing, you express your heart and soul wonderfully!

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~