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Riding

Slam the door!!
TRAPPED
CAN'T BREATHE
I've got to get out
get out of here
need to forget it all
just hold back the flood
memories and tears
run it off
run, one foot after the other.
I'm gone.

AGAIN, I'm angry, yelling and screaming
Slam the door, slam it again, and again
rev the engine, blast the radio
fight back the tears
don't think, just drive.
Panic, breathe, drive
SCREAM of RAGE

I'm allright.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 10, 2008

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    Wow,

    Gave me a panic attack just reading ya. lol..
    But that's the way ya captivate the readers. great job.

    Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~