Up to the highest peak, I go
Cold winds raging
Noose in hand
Faith bleeding out
A widow
Shall be widowed no more
I'm ready to fly
Among the angels
He has left me
To fly among fluttering wings of God
So I must leave this cruel world
To fly with him
The widow
Shall be my name no more
I am ready to kiss
This bitter world goodbye
This cruel world
Took my husband
Of 3 hours
So I must whisper goodbye
To this hating world
Author notes
http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/zaira-edehra-75762131
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This is a great write, although I think the usage of capitalization in every line should be fixed. Also, this piece seems a bit too suicidal.
Thanks for entering my challenge and good luck.
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I loved the inspiration for this piece and the piece itself. I believe you did this picture justice. Very Well done. Best of luck in my contest. -
Very grotesque and dark... almost makes me rather not get married, to be honest... the fate here is not that beautiful, moreover traumatic I'm sure.
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This is sad, but the sadness was overshadowed by the dramatic feeling to the poem. The foundation of the poem had been laid, and I think that it could have real potential. Thanks so much for your entry and good luck!
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Awwwww very sad.
Erika
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So incredibly sad but expressed SO well. Great work and good luck
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Very dramatic!!!! Love your take on the prompt!! Well done and thank you for entering my contest
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