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pendant la rêve (light)

you close your eyes
like the world with which you view them
confusion, disillusionment, and then the silent recognition that
you            are            lost
so much so (in fact) that you seek solace in the \music/
    but not in the /mind\
the strangest thing is happening to you
you realize it
you fear it
and you close your world
like the eyes with which you view it
                    sometimes i wonder if you quite see
                the mistake you made
            that i continue to pay for
        insensitive and confused
    ignorant and
wrong
-comment je t'aime-        how i love thee
-comment je te déteste-    how i loath thee
somehow the concept got lost in translation
-you are love-            tu es l'amour
-you are death-            tu est la mort
wrong
    ignorant and
        insensitive and confused
            that i continue to pay for
                the mistake you made
                    sometimes i wonder if you quite see
like the eyes with which you view it
and you close your world
you fear it
you realize it
the strangest thing is happening to you
    but not in the \mind/
so much so (in fact) that you seek solace in the /music\
lost          you            are
confusion, disillusionment, and then the silent recognition that
like the world with which you view them
you close your eyes

Author notes

prior to ta-ing bible, i was listening to my new darren hayes album (the tension and the spark) and this just kind of popped out somewhere between "i like the way" and "light".

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  • suzume
    March 10, 2008

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    Makes me feel kind of sad. But it's well written, the repetition and return are good, I think.

    I haven't heard him in a while.... a long while.

    ~ 雀


    • nanashiamai
      March 11, 2008
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      aw, thanks. i don't really know what its about. it is kind of sad too. but halfway through i realized i could reverse it and it would still make some kind of sense.

      i should let you borrow the cd sometime. its awesome. ah, pandora. i heard half the tracks on this cd (the tension and the spark) on my pandora station and liked them all so much i made the spur of the moment decision to order the cd. it was a good decision. ^_^

      how are you?