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Running

Breathing in check
Start out slow
Keep the pace
Build up speed
Breaths quicken
Pulse exploding
Feel the burn
Push yourself
All the way
Cant stop
Legs like jell-o
End in sight
Energy bursts
Legs strong
Lungs pumping
Destinations reached
Body collapses 
Heart going crazy
Lay in the grass
Look at the sky
Old record broke
For today...



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I was just thinking about running the other day, and came up with this... This could have other meanings.. what do you think they could be?

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  • Aon3
    March 11, 2008

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    Very Good

    Very good poem, i could really tell you were into that, just maybe more detail towards your feelings. I definitely felt where you were coming from though AWESOME!