Chorus
Come back...
come back to us...
because you looking at us
with discust
It Hurts...
It Hurts...
were sorry
weve sinned
we waged the war
from within
And we lost...
we lost
Verse 1
so much time has passed
since we last had sinned
and he found it time
to draw us back to him
the battles
that weve lost
have been to us
a very great cost
but yet
he loves...
us...
from above
Chorus
Come back...
come back to us...
because you looking at us
with discust...
It Hurts...
It Hurts...
were sorry
weve sinned
we waged the war
from within
And we lost...
we lost
Verse 2
we hope
he'll forgive
because for what we did
we dont deserve to live
Life...
before death
we hope to be able to stop
to catch our breath
Before our death
we hope to do
whatever we can do
that will forever please you
Chorus
Come back...
come back to us...
because you looking at us
with discust
It Hurts...
It Hurts...
were sorry
weve sinned
we waged the war
from within
And we lost...
we lost
Verse 3
we lost
against our sin
but its never over
until we win
this will last
until the very end
and we will continue
until then
this will last
until the very end
and we will continue
to fight for you
Chorus
Come back...
come back to us...
because you looking at us
with discust
It Hurts...
It Hurts...
were sorry
weve sinned
we waged the war
from within
And we lost...
we lost
A contest entry
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630 points, ended April 4, 2008, 18 entries
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wow. no words can even compare or compliemnt what you've written here. just amazing
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Brillaint words
Admire your gift of lyric writing; this is a good song indeed.
The flow was almost flawless.
THANKS FOR SHARING AND BEST OF LUCK
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the flow is good
the reason is good
the poem...
GREAT
**kat -
wow that was fantastic--great job
♥ meg -
I think this is a very good write, i loved this a lot..the flow was great and just the word its like there there like idk i cant even say what i am trying to say, you can see this would be a great song! there thats kinda what i was geting at keep it up i am loveing it!
nessa
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