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Love Is Coming




Beauty lays in waiting
for the man of her dreams
Though it is not forever
it feels much longer than it seems
The beauty of his mind
has touched her perfect heart
He is all that she breathes for
she longs to share each part
This love is of the very first time
longing for life of love to start


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  • MonAmourEternel
    March 11, 2008
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    i love it

  • MonAmourEternel
    March 11, 2008

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    Yes, You have expressed the very true meaning.
    Pure,innocent and passionate expressions.
    Your views are very good. But there are very few who posses such kind of clear thinking.
    I like it.
    All the very best for writing more & more like this.

    Au revoir
    Bin


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    The beauty of his mind
    has touched her perfect heart
    He is all that she breathes for
    she longs to share each part

    These lines touched a place deep in my heart and brought so many memories flooding back. Your poem is full of the beauty of love. Best wishes in the contest.

    Margaret