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Fantasia

Missing image
Your smile sparkles,
shaming sun's glow,
intoxicating rapture.

Absinthe eyes
hypnotize, gods
become mortal

and the universe
stops for us.

Author notes

"Since we met seconds no longer split/instead that retain flashes of fantasy/which seem to pause beauty perfect." - Mark Griffin

For my love. Quote provided by Marky

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  • Ryno
    December 16, 2008

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    I liked the second stanza. Personally the first stanza was too abstract for me and the last stanza was too cliche. I think that stronger, more creative images are needed to portray your emotion here. Thanks for the entry.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    awwww this is so beautifully written and beautifully put togehter. hehe so glad to see a silver attached


  • sweetgirlwa
    March 10, 2008
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    Congrats on the silver, great work here.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Congrats on silver well earned


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    What a lucky BUNNY you have. hehe

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