the gods shift the clocks
back to creation,
when the first flowers flowed
from the molten ash;
our drifting dreams.
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10-20-20 by Cerulean Sunrise.
525 points, ended March 10, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short yet amazing. Very effectice and welldone on the gold trophy
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short but sweet. Keep up the good work.
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no wonder this got gold - amazing
Never ♥
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wow the imagery and metaphors in this piece is so beautifully stunning and captured it amazes me. well done
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well done with great imagery in such brevity. many blessings always xxx
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Wow, this is gorgeous, sweetie! I can see that Marky loves it too, and if it's good enough for my cohort of doom, then it's good enough for me
Good luck to you!
Laura
xxx
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Interesting take I likes it
alot of imagery within 20 words. Good luck
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I freaking love this!
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