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[Our Lips Tell Stories]

the gods shift the clocks
back to creation,
when the first flowers flowed
from the molten ash;
our drifting dreams.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Short yet amazing. Very effectice and welldone on the gold trophy

  • short but sweet. Keep up the good work.

  • no wonder this got gold - amazing

    Never ♥

  • wow the imagery and metaphors in this piece is so beautifully stunning and captured it amazes me. well done


  • Stardust-luvr
    March 10
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    well done with great imagery in such brevity. many blessings always xxx

  • Wow, this is gorgeous, sweetie! I can see that Marky loves it too, and if it's good enough for my cohort of doom, then it's good enough for me Good luck to you!

    Laura
    xxx


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10

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    Interesting take I likes it alot of imagery within 20 words. Good luck


  • markgrif gold member
    March 10
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    I freaking love this!

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