In loving memory
Of the girl who lives on,
Found within you,
Seared in your soul.
She will never die,
For Death's a parting
And she isn't gone;
Your heart's the last place
For her to lie
Without longing or strife,
Your angel forever.
Author notes
Written for the loved ones of a girl I knew who passed away.
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Very well written. Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. A touching and eloquent description of the human experience of dealing with death. This is a very well structured poem with a heart. This is a strong poem , full of emotion and passion.
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Thank you so much.
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yes nicely done jess its a good read. It's nice and hopeful twards the end.
your a great poet.
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This is sweet.
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Thank you. She was a poet, so I thought the best way to remember her would be through poetry.
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