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Restless

Heart of mine why do you bleed
Are you drunk with love or it’s only the effect of the mead
Heart of mine why do you weep
Tired thou art, rest now in my palm its time to sleep.

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  • ennovy silver member
    March 10

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    Excellent Writing

    Heartfelt words of care, love and living. You captured the emotions of a man with a heart...I love these four lines...........Novy


  • Midnight-x-Rose gold member
    March 10

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    This is cute... silly but sweet at the same time, with a little nice and pleasant rhyme, nicely done thanks for entering.