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Pardon My Voice

put another tic-mark next to the

            X on the spot near the

                        chad while they

 

bring order to

            our voices

                        the steps our feet take

                        the choices we make

                        won’t be ours for long

 

put another chastity belt on the

            democracy

they dictate

                        they bring

                       

                        they bring

                        they bring

                        order to chaos

 

wind up the key in my back and push me

            right then right again

 

make me a wind-up toy that won’t

                        talk back or too loud –

 

pull the string for safe language

            so I don’t offend

                        anyone

                        anytime

                        anywhere

 

the string will scream

            ‘yes, 

                        uncle

                                      sam'

 

                        they promise to protect me –

 

            but instead

 

a headlock chokes.

 

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Comments

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  • MMGerard323
    April 28
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    i love it good job
    best of luck in my contest

    ♥ MMGerard32
  • Figaro
    April 24
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    Very powerful. I like the image of the string in the back like a doll. Great poem.
  • I love this and I totally agree. This is a great poem! Deffinately how I see things too. Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck!!!
    Mega
  • Emily, this is another fine work! Good message and style of writing in this! I salute you!!


  • DragonBlue silver member
    March 11

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    Great write and format with a purpose. Short but sweet and to the point. Thank you for your entry into my contest.

    Write On~
    )O(
    DragonBlue

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