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Whispers...

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Whispers throughout night, as wind blows
with chills set deep within my soul.
Whispers of hope, dreams, tomorrows.


At night's end, another whisper, letting me know

how you will always love me, no matter how far I may be;

because I live through You, and You within my soul, 

I know I am being carried when I thought all was lost.

 

...And so, one more time, I hear a whisper

assuring me I am never alone. 

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Gandhi's, I offer you Peace

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 16, 2008
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    So very beautifully written
    A fine sharing in this contest
    All the best to you! Good luck!


  • Desire gold member
    March 13, 2008

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: Whispers...
    This one tugged at the Heartstrings for I kept seeing like whispers on a breeze (appeared windy that day)...near a body of water...(like a lake)
    like a wish made...stone tossed into water...
    but not just any stone...like an Amethyst
    also hearing quartz crystal...for healing to commense
    This swelled the eyes

    These lines grabbed and pulled~
    At night's end, another whisper, letting me know
    how you will always love me, no matter how far I may be;
    because I live through You, and You within my soul,
    I know I am being carried when I thought all was lost.

    Marvelous take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Wow,

    An excellent piece here my friend!
    Brings such hope...in knowing love can reach where we're at.
    Thanks for sharing, and all the best within the contest!

    -Timothy


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    When one lets what another has spoke and written of inspire them so beauty can come from their feelings and thoughts.


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    yes if only there were such progress, there is hope, good luck...Moons

  • Bob Fox silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    If only

    If only we could learn to work together. your sentiments are just and lovely and perhaps one day my friend

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