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Water Goddess

 

 

 

A single heart in the sand

Can show how much I love you

My love strong

Holds our bond here

 

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  • storiesuntold
    May 12, 2008
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    Good

    I like the love within this write it is very good


  • Kuranya gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    This is a beautiful take on the prompt, you captured a lot of emotion in so few words, well done

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen


  • Chocolate Chip
    March 10, 2008
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    aww! how sweet!


  • February Moon gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Clappies.

  • February Moon gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    This is beautiful!


  • Simply Simple
    March 10, 2008
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    Awww! This is really good. Amazing really. Awesomeness. Really really really great. Hehe

  • February Moon gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Only supposed to be twenty words.

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