Chained by tides
of moon's destiny,
she engraves her love
in sands of forlorn.
Too late.
Waves erase
her plea.
Author notes
20 words exactly
Prompt: http://faerienymph.deviantart.com/art/Love-79440513 please credit
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550 points, ended March 11, 2008, 8 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ah those waves, they have no mercy for the messges we hold dear, they will slap them away with ease, a good poem.
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This is beautiful.
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awwwwyes a lovely simple take on the promt good luck xx
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This is a beautiful take on the prompt, perfect wording and longing.... well done
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you the best of luck
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Good luck!
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