If I close my eyes real tight
I can see images in my mind,
Of how you'll never laugh, talk, or sing
And instead be deaf and blind.
You'll never get to grow up,
You'll never get to live
The hurt you brought upon us all
Is one gift you never should give.
What could have ever been so bad
To make you do just what you did?
You ruined your life completely,
Your only chance to be a kid.
Unbelievable is what we're feeling
Like we're under some curse
Everyday life is dreadful
And makes the pain even worse.
In our hearts we'll pray
For the great person you had to kill;
Steven will be remembered,
And loving him, we always will.
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Hi. Thought I'd return a read to you and just picked this one. I like the feelings expressed and the way it moves through the thoughts very smoothly. The rhyming is simple but effective. You might watch the meter and rhythms ever so slightly so it flows smoothly and evenly. Nice job!
Paul
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