groggy reality
jolted her senses,
translucent dreams
dissipate reluctantly
on the open sea
Author notes
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http://misty2007.deviantart.com/art/My-Heart-Will-Go-On-79538329
A contest entry
- Quickie Picture Contest Two Choices by Kari.
300 points, ended March 10, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful flow.
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Your has great flow to it. I like this good luck with it in the contest thanks for the comment
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Oh I absolutly love how you captured the prompt it says so much in so few words. well done with this piece
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I love it
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