Waiting for the night to come,
As once again the day is done,
Can you hold me for tonight?
Just so that I don't get a fright?
Once again... the day is done.
Author notes
Picture prompt:- Option 1 http://kizioko.deviantart.com/art/3-9-08-79593746
A contest entry
- Quickie Picture Contest Two Choices by Kari.
300 points, ended March 10, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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HOODWINKED !!!
Lovely response to the picture prompt here, Your words are well crafted, well done!
You have been Hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits today because WE CARE!
Dennis
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I adore that picture...and I have absolutely no idea how it relates to the poem, but I don't care, because you're brilliant.
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I'm always waiting for night. I love sleeping though, so that could be why. haha. This is a very good poem, I really like the rhyming. :]
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*huggles*
Awesome, you rhymeddd!
Nice
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ionno how... I can never usually rhyme... I've gotta write a rhyming poem for round six of sulfane's contests... and I dunno how!! o.0 *cries*
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Aww
I'm sure you can do it
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I keep trying and I'm failing miserably...
Helllpppp!!
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Did you they have a built in rhyming thinger here on ap?
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nuhuh...
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uh huh
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Ionno
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Yeah you type in a word and it show all the words that rhyme with it.
There is also Rhymezone.com
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Very nice Work Good luck with it
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awwwww
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-holds you close and tight and never ever lets you go- your my twinny and my twinny you shall be forever more
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