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Part Of The Sea

Trapped eternally
To the sea
Bonded by the water's bittersweet love
Caged in the waters of hell
For a lifetime

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http://misty2007.deviantart.com/art/My-Heart-Will-Go-On-79538329

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Wow
    That sounds like doing some harsh time.

    Thanks for sharing.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 10, 2008

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    You tell a great story in just a few short lines. I want to know more! Great write, best of luck in the contest.

    ♥
    whisper


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    Very well done. Seems like someone drowned her with your write. Good luck in the contest


  • Kari gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    That's deep