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Alluding to Life

Banshee cries echo through fog
The coldness seeps along unfelt
Even trapped in eternal abandon
These phantoms know not their fate
A cruel death mimicking painful life

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http://misty2007.deviantart.com/art/My-Heart-Will-Go-On-79538329

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    I like where you took this!


    Be Well


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 10, 2008

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    Very well done this was a great take on the prompt Good luck with it RedwingSpirit


  • Kari gold member
    March 10, 2008
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    Wow..stunning


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 10, 2008

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    This is wonderful, I love the third line especially. Great write, best of luck in the contest.

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    whisper