Carry my heart beyond constraint of breath
back to pure nirvana of circumstance
before far too fluent ebb changed current
Allowing distances to be replaced
by sweet surge of familiar caress
Author notes
Image from:
http://misty2007.deviantart.com/art/My-Heart-Will-Go-On-79538329
A contest entry
- Quickie Picture Contest Two Choices by Kari.
300 points, ended March 10, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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such a sad one
'back to pure nirvana of circumstance'
change sometimes is good, but without hurt we will nevr know how to love unconditionally
nice one!
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Awesome write bro, I really enjoy this one, especially the last line.. it's amazing! so well written. Well done
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Awesome Brother this is well worded Good luck with this in the contest
ArtsyFartsy
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This is so beautiful. Great take on the picture, best of luck in the contest.
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whisper
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Well done
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