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Goddess of Creation

Sweet goddess of creation,
Worshipped by all mankind.
Beautiful goddess of love,
Everything began with you.

Bathed by gods,
A moment to relax.
Finally resting,
Exhausted from watching over your flock.





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  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    This is such a wonderful write. you have used such wonderful words here and it is written with such tenderness. well done.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    March 17, 2008
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    Good Take on the prompt--and great flow of verse!
    Best of luck in the contest!