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Daddy's little girl

Daddy's little girl was such a princess
She was so beautiful and loving
After all she was only seven

Daddy's little girl was such a delight
She never put's up a fight
She laughs and plays all day long
She never realized what she did was wrong

Now she's thirteen, with such high spirits
She loved her friends and family, and that's it
Daddy's little girl was such a wonderful girl
She never pleads nor needs
She usually gets what she wants

Daddy's little girl like being the center of attention
She was always the popular one at school
Then one day she came home
With no fear
She saw her mother disappear

Her daddy shot her in the head
All just for one little misled
She was crying and whining as she went to her room
You never saw that little girl no more
She different and new

Daddy's little girl was hidden in her secrets
From that day of her mom's funeral
Her dad took over her life
He lost control

He was always was proud of her
If one little mistake was out of place
She gets beat and abused to the face

Her life is different
She sees things in someone else's eyes
But no one knew what she hides

She hides her pain in cutting
She hides her cutting in burning
She hides her skin in clothes
But her daddy never really knows

He liked to touch her now and then
But no one knew what she hid in sin
Her life was torn when her body was swollen
Now she can't speak, her heart is broken

She hides in sighs at school sometimes
But the day she say's it all, and cries
She was taken away from her father a year ago
Still he haunts her and stalks her everytime she's alone
But still... no one knows

She was once daddy's little girl
Full of sunshine and hope
Now he broken her
She has to mope

Everyone really saw what has happened
Now she can't speak
She's is dead and a geek
She was daddy's little girl after all
After all this happened
There is no hope at all

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this is for all the woman and children who goes through this everyday

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  • This is a wonderful poem, with a wonderful and powerful meaning but it had a lot of errors and awkward wordings in it which took away from its overall potential. Teen amny women and children have gone through this. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.


  • ASmileForYou
    January 6

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    Wow, this was great. I absolutely loved reading it! Thank you for entering it! And thank you for writing it for those people. It needs to be heard.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 20, 2008

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    This is a really nice poem, but this contest is for poems that have already won a silver trophy. I'm sorry, but I'll have to remove it from the contest.


    whisper


  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    June 25, 2008
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    Damn this is really good I enjoy so much great express =]


  • love.hate
    March 11, 2008
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    this is really good


  • maggii8292
    March 11, 2008
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    dangg

    this is wonderful....
    do you mind if i copy it?


  • x-dragon-wings-x
    March 11, 2008
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    omg this is such a great poem full of emotion and sadness great job one of my fav poems


  • broken-princess
    March 10, 2008
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    wow this was a great poem, it was sad to me i will say but it was good,
    nessa


  • ladybug737
    March 10, 2008
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    love it

    as usual you wrote a beutiful poem

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