an icy chill running
down your spine
a vast ocean -
waves loud and crashing
a sense of calm
a breath of fresh air
blue
not a bold colour
more of one that
flows and
blends in
Maybe thats the point.
Why are colours often contradictory?
or just easily divided into opposites?
Icy and calming - not
things usually associated
with one another
a colour of the good guys
a good background
a fading colour
.
.
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rain
blue
Author notes
poem or not i consider it a train of thought
a muse if you will.
verbal alchemist (hope I spelled that right)
I hope you like this since you liked hte first colour study.
Please note color and colour are the SAME not a spelling error I am just canadian.
lol
In a list
Please judge as critically as you want
Comments
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Very nice piece. Blue is my favourite colour, I find it a nice calming colour. Great write.
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I like how you compared the color blue with different aspects of nature among other things. It's really deep, and i would consider it a poem if anything. I loved this one the most out of your color studies, not because it's my favorite color, but because you take the word and you apply it in so many ways.
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A very conversational write. It holds your attention throughout the piece, but what I most liked was the little drizzle and the word rain. An effective use of the period. Many underestimate the value of a few little dots, not you. Clever and interesting write. Well done.
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way to goo colors are so niceee it is like a funnel you have funneled from your brain to the blank sheet so greattt i find kind of sadness in this i donno maybe thats just me:S well done im bookmarking this
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