She lay in quiet contemplation
The sun slowly setting down
Her awareness slowly gained
While her body lay in languid peace
Inspiration seeps from her fluid limbs
Reaching out to one and all
A trickle of wetness bathing creation
Casting her serenity into the world
Into the hearts of man
A Venus placed upon the water
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired-Beautiful by sweetgirlwa.
1500 points, ended March 20, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I have carefully thought it out and have come to the conclusion... What?... Who you talkin' 'bout?
Comments
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This was great! I wish I had more trophies and points to give. I really enjoyed this and loved the story you told here. Thank you so much for your entry.
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A nice take on the prompt and written with good flow of verse-- Best of luck in the contest!
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Beautiful poem....you have captured the picture so eloquently....good luck
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You did a gorgeous job on this J!!!! Very well done, your imagery and flow was exquisit as usual!!! Best of luck lovey....
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