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forget?

Can u feel me next to u
could u ever feel me next to u
did u see me rip my heart out
did you feel me place it in ur hands
NO?
well do you remember where u dropped it
do u remember when you stopped loving me
can you see the tears running down my face
did u hear my heart break
did u hear me scream that i loved u
could you try to remember my face
could you try to remember feeling me in your arms
no?
then can you help me not remember you too

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  • Zilong
    March 30, 2008

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    such a strong poem. very strong, and I like the way you phrase the questions. Truly an excellent write, and very emotional.