If you must
then take me
all of me
no
just enough of me to breathe...
My knees are becoming far to weak
between ecstasy and fear.
I know how much you need me
and I have longed to be here
This close to you
Sensations fluctuate
from chills to heat
Painfully aroused,
by the penetration of your teeth
if only she wanted more from me....
You're satisfied
Now I stare mesmerized
upon your dark,enchanting face
Still my blood drips down
from your tantalizing mouth
those I have always longed to kiss
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired by Firequeen.
300 points, ended March 12, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
I'm completely blown away with your piece!
superb in every way
Love your talented write -
Longing yet never getting there.
Beautiful.
I like what you did with this
Great write.
Thank you for your entry.
Fire
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