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Troubles in my life

Every day and every night
I wonder and wonder what will tomorrow be like
With all the troubles going on in my life
I am very curious to find out "why"
I wonder and wonder
Will there even be a tomorrow
I sometimes get angry
No one is here to answer my questions

I am sad
I am inconceivable
I often don't listen to what people say
I often just want to have every thing my own way
Every day I still wonder and wonder
What will I be when I grow up
What am I suppose to say
I wonder and wonder every day
With all the troubles going on in my life
I finally decide it was time to do things right
I will one day come out from the dark
And shine like the stars
And will be the one to answer my own question
What will tomorrow be like

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  • CountryCousin
    April 3, 2008

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    I think you have the answer.

    I think that you have the answer to the troubles in your life. Surely you put a lot of thought into this piece. It was worded very well. Good job.


  • Judo
    March 10, 2008

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    Great poem. Doesn't exactly say what the trouble is, but that's okay, you don't have to edit it. Lovely word usage and awesome poem. best of luck in the contest.