wild waves wash the sand
churn recede return once more
sandpipers saunter
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A contest entry
- Short Japanese Forms Only - Contest by poetryality.
1750 points, ended April 15, 2008, 28 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh now... this gave me exquisite visuals. The thing I so love about haiku is the fact that it can spin so many images with so few words. Yours did just that. Thank you for this wonderful entry in my contest. I wish you the best in the Comp.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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