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Guardian

Guard my heart
unlock what I've locked
find what I've lost
and show what I've hidden
dust off what I've forgotten
piece together what I've broken
and refill my empty cup
blow off all my dust
and wipe off the soot
for a new life I want to start
guide my heart
show me my path
wipe away my tears
and forgive me of my wrongs

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  • Evelyn
    August 3
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    Very good.

    Something I wish I had as a kid. But no matter, I didn't turn out to bad to this day did I ?


  • shaynabell726
    March 10, 2008

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    I love it!! It's awesome...not to be rude but you have a few mispellings..... How about guardian as your title??? Just a thought!